HW 25 - Story Comments and Analysis

ABE
i think you did a really good in making this story, i felt that i was able really able to pick up who were cooler than others because of the things they have. one of the kids in the story had a car which made him a little more cooler than the other people.

victor
i thought that your story was really good and it pretty much shows that to get popular you have to do things that you really would never do and you have to act differently. which is true in some cases but it just depends who are you trying to impress.

norra
i really enjoyed reading your story. i like how you wrote about a girl moving to another city and its her first day of school and how you went in to detail about how they were dressed differently and stuff. because different places have different ways of being cool.

brandon
i thought that your story was really good i felt that it showed how people change when they try to impress someone or hang out with someone and i thought what eric thought of those kids being cool changed because they picked on people and he didn't like that.

matt
i really enjoyed reading your story i thought that your story was really good. i also thought that it capture sort of what some teenagers might go through and how some things that might be considered cool might not be.


Part b

I felt that in general all the story some how related to each other in different ways and also in different meaning. one main thing i felt that all the story had in one way or another is that had to do either being cool or trying to be cool but changing in a way that they don't really like. one story that showed this was in Brandon Z. story it talked about this kid who wanted to be cool but the people that he wanted to be cool with were picking on other people which he didn't like so he decide to be the bigger man and not join those people and just be himself. in Matt B. story it talked about a girl who was considered cool sort of being lost and not really knowing what to do with her life. i felt that all these story's relate to each other in many ways and how being cool is not always that great because sometimes it has to do with you changing or doing things that you really don't want to do.