Friday, January 22, 2010

HW 36 - Triangle Partner Help

-Matt

Main Idea: In new york city, it is very easy to be considered cool and most of us are. We are surrounded by things that we want because we think it will give us that notification from others that allows us to be known as cool

Matt- i thought that the arguments you had were really good and the article that you brought up about " a poverty of the mind", was really good evidence. i think that something else you should include as well in your paper would be talking about cool as a life style like what we talked about in class, about a black kid living in the projects buying Prada shoes and how he might end up dropping out and stuff.

another little thing is just to check your grammer but overall its a good paper

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